https://docs.google.com/document/d/1RWb_8VCqDlHNGTCH3GDuxDyRJhtuKDYfspzy1nrKruI/edit?usp=sharing
byline rewrite
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1KMenZDwICwcrHzJjbiF2QkIWVsC4XVOF1uPeos8vLIg/edit?usp=sharing